Comments on 'Storms in the Night'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2016-04-29
This is a really great look into Nightstorm's past! I really love the mental image of her shouting "Go rain on someone else!" at the sky - it's such a wonderful summary of a slightly irritated or moody teenager's feelings. It won't change anything, but I love that she states it out loud! It marks a really nice contrast to the introspective nature of the beginning and end. The naming of the landmarks is a really great touch, too! It's nice to be able to see on a map where Brook/Nightstorm is!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-03-19
What a perfect Soul Name Search story!! I can see how the whole process could be beyond frustrating with someone of Brook/Nightstorm's temperament!
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