Comments on 'All In A Name, Part 2'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-02-26
One-Leg really went through a lot, losing his leg, and this story showcases that beautifully! I love the sending exchange here - or well, sending storm might be a better word for it. A great lead up to what comes next, as well as something that puts what comes next in a new light. Very interesting read!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-02-24
Wow, I know elves send, but what rich sendings!! I can see him texting furiously in modern life!!! LOL! He really got his anger out and you could REALLY feel what he feels! So great!
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