Comments on 'To the Western Isles, Pt. 3'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-02-26
The tension is mounting sky high, here! Even I, who've got the "advantage" of knowing what will happen next, am on the edge of my seat. I love the interaction between the elves and I adore that cliffhanger. Can't wait for part 4!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-01-24
What I liked best about this piece was the tension. It was subtle yet constant! You never really took a break from it! At the end I felt exhausted LOL! Good Job! And OMG the first cocoon!!
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2016-01-22
!!!!!

Excellent! I really enjoyed the slow build of this piece, with the realizations that are coming to the explorers, and the marshbeast story. This is really great, and introduces a few new pieces of information, like the human encampment there, and the ending...!!

So excited for the next part!
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