Comments on 'Far Too Close'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2016-01-22
Ooh. Very interesting to see Windburn and Farscout together like this. I hadn't really considered the tension between them before, and sympathize a bit with Windburn not knowing how to express what he's feeling nor being able to read Farscout. I think one of my favourite phrases was 'I'm digging through mud to find bears' - that's a really interesting metaphor to use!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-01-16
I can really feel the current tension and the shared history here. That is SO Farscout, not revealing his emotions "on the job". Hope everyone can soon relax!!
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