Comments on 'Footsteps Into Uncertainty'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2016-05-15
Really interesting! I enjoy seeing how quickly the roles/jobs can shift for Tunnelrat, and you do a great job of introducing enough about the characters to keep these stories really entertaining as stand-alone pieces as well as parts of the larger whole.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-02-26
I love the sense of...not defeat, but certainly a dash of hopelessness, from Tunnelrat here. There is so very clearly a lot of underhanded politics going on among the trolls and it's thrilling to see the trolls "played out against each other". So many hidden agendas battling it out! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-01-17
It always amazed me how complex the troll's culture is compared to the elves! All the diplomacy, spying, hierarchy and intrigue!! There must be hundreds if not thousands of trolls under the ground! How do they feed themselves without coming to the surface or being detected? Fascinating plot line!
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