Comments on 'Motherís Gift'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2016-01-14
So cute! What an uplifting story. I really like the way that Agate, Dagger and Shimmer interact here, and the way that Dagger makes sure that Agate pays attention when it's important. The hints at Shimmer's magic/talents are wonderful! There are little touches that make me think that Agate may have stronger dark emotions at this time, in a way that is not emphasized but may form a sort of undercurrent that Dagger protects Shimmer from seeing. I also like how the writing tone changes at the end, it feels a bit like a fairy-tale ending in the way that it describes the stone throughout time!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-01-09
This is so adorable! What a happy family!! Glad Shimmer found her gift/Gift! :D
Sofia LindstrŲm
New! Entered: 2016-01-07
What a sweet story! Love that we get to see more glimpses of Starskimmer's childhood and her relationship with her parents. Very cute to have her give her mother a special stone :)
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