Comments on 'Ah-Choo'
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New! Entered: 2016-02-26
|Love how much this tells the reader of Willow and Beetle's relationship! The whole "I don't want to admit she was right" is cute, because it's clearly not based in any ill-will or thoughts like "I'm better than my partner". The inclusion of Foxtail was also great, since it shows off quite a bit of her character development when it comes to responsibilities and relationships with other elves.|
New! Entered: 2016-01-04
|Every couple has their own way of being, dealing and feeling. Their own Universe! This was so cute how Beetle correctly predicted how Willow would react. And she did!|