Comments on 'Mane Issue'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-02-26
Really like how Newt was sweetly awkward here, eventually complimeting Crackle as he did and clearly knowing what she'd infer from him saying such things about her hair. Very socially savy, our Newt, but not without his awkward moments. Love Crackle reaction! All in all, a story that made me smile.
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-12-31
Wow, Crackle's becoming a grown azz-ed lady!! LOL! If I were Newt, I wouldn't know how to respond either!! He will always be the "oldest" though!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-12-31
That awkward moment between teenage friends... haha! I guess, I was as suprised as Newt to see that Crackle noticed the tension that suddenly arose between them and took advantage of it. Looking forward to how this development will continue.
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