Comments on 'You Know You’re Right'

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Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-12-29
Angie, many thanks for this story! I wanted to see a glimpse of Notch's point of view regarding the estrangement between him and Rainpace for quite some time. Great to see, it HAS an impact on him.
It was also interesting to see how much Rainpace and Foxtail (and all other word hunters) had already learned about the humans. I wonder how often the elves discuss about their neighbors like this.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2015-12-26
This was an interesting look both inside Notch's head and on how some of the elves view the humans. It's also interesting to see what the elves have noticed and figured out about their five-fingered neighbors' behavior. And poor Notch, not wanting to admit he feels left out.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-12-20
It's always so interesting to get these stories from Notch's point of view! He's got such a devious mind. And here it serves very well to show a few things, including a growing sense of isolation, and delivers a bit of new information about the humans as well. Can't wait to read more from him, I wonder how these thoughts have grown or changed to the 'present' day. :)
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-12-20
Notch reminds me so much of certain of my old friends. He thinks he's got your number, he lives in the past, and what the heck is he up to anyway!?... Sounds like a Toxic Elf to be around!
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