Comments on 'The Next Steps'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2015-12-26
It was interesting to see how the tribe comes down from high alert after a rather long time of looking both once and twice over their shoulder. Adding in the behavior of the Painted Faces and Amber Hunters made a lot of sense, and I feel all arguments and reactions made me learn something new or establish something about each of the characters in the story.
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-12-01
This was such a nice, important story, guys! Even though "nothing happened", you can tell that everything happened! What a great transition from Defense to Upcoming Adventure! :D
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