Comments on 'Birdcatcherís Howl'

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Sofia LindstrŲm
New! Entered: 2016-03-26
Ouch, hit me right in the heart! Short but very clear on what it wanted to capture.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-11-03
I agree with Beth. Dreamflight's pain is evident. It's interesting, too... how she realizes she still has a part of him with her, and how she'll miss him even more when that scent and tangible piece is gone.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-10-27
Sometimes only a few words are needed. You've really captured Dreamflight's pain here.
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