Comments on 'Thistles and All'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-01-08
This story is so funny that I read it out loud to my sister (who has little knowledge of Elfquest and about zero knowledge of River Twine) and she couldn't keep from giggle and laughing at every scene. "WHAT IF IT DOESN'T GROW BACK!" is now a favored in-joke between the two of us. Hilarious story!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-11-03
So fun to read. I loved every moment of it. "Will it grow back?" was a great question, especially since it was on everyone's mind. :) I really like seeing pieces of everyone's character, and it's nice to have a happy, funny scene in the midst of everything that went on at that time. :) Nice reminder that life is full of laughter, too!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2015-09-29
Everyone's role in this really is just wondeful! Very funny, especially Greenweave's perpetual fears that he will someone be the one who "ruins" Farscout -- or, the idea that steady, dependable Farscout is willing to do something so outlandish, and has to be treated as if he might be a bit off his rocker on this one. I also just really like how in the beginning, harmless banter grows until it's out of control and suddenly everyone is embarking on this strange scheme. I love how every successive person they approach has just about the same reaction, too. :)
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-08-15
Hehe, oh it's good to read such a fun comedy! You write these so well! I love how it's a group project, the interactions are priceless. It's such a great concept - and I really like how novel an idea it is to almost everyone. This group of elders really has the sense of a gang of teenagers getting into trouble - nice to be reminded of that playfulness, rather than age. Really fantastic!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-08-14
I LOVE the running gag of: "But will it grow back???" LOL! You really elaborated on Greenweave's personality ~ he is truly the fussy, opinionated hairdresser!! (We've all had one!) who grumbles disapprovingly while working on the hairstyle you're paying for!!!
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