Comments on 'Dreamflight and the Prey'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2015-12-18
Adorable and funny! Dreamflight's crush on Windburn is cute and this description of her "hunt" was very amusing. Clearly the only reasonable solution was to boop his nose ;)
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-11-04
I really wonder how long Winburn's patience with Dreamflight will last. ;)
However, I admire how positive Dreamflight stays despite WB's constant rejection and disapproval. I guess she knows she will never get into a romantic relationship with him and accepts that. She simply enjoys the feeling of having a crush and rides out the endorphines.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-11-02
Ha ha... poor Windburn. Dreamflight truly is flighty - am glad to SEE that in action.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2015-09-29
I really like that this shows Dreamflight being flighty and unpractical… but at the same time, that she can focus and stalk something like a true wolfrider, even if the target is less than serious. Poor Windburn, he just seems to have no idea what's going on!
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-08-15
Hehe, I was wondering when I read 'flash of read' and the cryptically described prey... I'd caught sight of the picture a little earlier and was wondering whose arm that was! What a cute story! I really like the playful characterization of Dreamflight - from just 'happening' to have rolled down a reedy river bank, to running away. She has a really playful, lighthearted feel here, and Windburn's response is too perfect. Lovely story!
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