Comments on 'More Than Just Flowers'
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New! Entered: 2016-04-02
|Foxtail and Honey bonding, that was unexpected! But it really worked and was very interesting to read about. Learning more about Whispersilk, even if it's after her death, was also a treat - since she spent so much time on her work while she was alive it's great to see other sides of her while still keeping with her personality. Lovely story!|
New! Entered: 2015-11-16
|This is so beautiful, and really brings a sense of healing. It's great to see how easily these two could have lapsed into anger and barbs, yet they both choose to take the evening in a different direction. I think it shows so much growth for both elves. |
I'd love to hear the stories of Whispersilk through these two, but I really like the choice to leave the story focused on the immediate interaction between Honey and Foxtail. It's a lovely scene, and your words really capture a sense of reconciliation.
New! Entered: 2015-09-30
|I really like how there's an edge in the exchange at the start, but they can rise above that to really connect by the end. It's especially striking if you've recently looked back at the stories when Honey had just come out of wrapstuff. It emphasizes what a long way these two have had to come.|
New! Entered: 2015-07-29
|Nicely done. I like the way the conversation starts and I recognize a lot of old, hurt feelings, this time, mostly in Foxtail. Her defensive stand feels very real. |
It's nice to see new relationships building. It's probably not going to be a friendship but it's good to know they can deal with each other now. And it's touching that they find something to bond over.
New! Updated: 2015-07-04
|That is so beautiful!! My heart hurts a little for Foxtail when I read her stories concerning Whispersilk, and this one brings a balm of healing for the young elf. Nicely done!|
New! Entered: 2015-07-03
|Vary nice and sweet. They reaction between the two is kind of stand-offish but sincere. I can see Honey in a big old feild of flowers and Foxtail sitting behind a bush and watching her. (be a nice pictuer) Good job.|