Comments on 'Moments in Rhyme'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-03-26
This was such a great transition from One-Leg's own childhood to that of his son! Loved the rhythm of this, it flowed very easily.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2015-09-30
I really like your idea here for bookending One-Leg as both a child being encouraged and a parent encouraging his child. Really short, but vivid portrayal.
Tah-marien F.
New! Entered: 2015-08-09
Moments in Time and rhyme. Nice play on seasons and words.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2015-07-03
This is very neat. I like the sense of time passing. I can almost see this playing out before my eyes. very poetic use of the theme and time passing.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-06-29
Wow, that's pretty cool how you combined those two pics. Lovely poem, Chris!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-06-29
I love how you connote the passage of time! Hundreds of years look like one season! Nice!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-06-25
So glad to read the finished piece. I think you did a great job letting the flow take the reader from the first moment through a jump in time that is so smooth in its arrival, but not unexpected. Tying the art to it was a nice touch as well!
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