Comments on 'Choices'

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Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-11-21
It is impressive how devoted Thornbow is to his sister, that he did something that stands so fundamentally against his world view and the Now he cherishs.
It is great to see him in your hands, Angie. It was about time we see more of him and his personality.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2015-09-30
I actually think it's a good thing that Thornbow snapped at Dreamflight -- she needed to be snapped-at! She's so wrapped up in herself, and so like her mother in that moment. A pity that he backed down from that lesson. Because yes, she was fully an adult at that time, not a little cub; but she clearly still needed feedback from others, and I get the sense that she didn't get a lot of it, at least not to the point where any of it sunk in.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2015-09-05
It's so great to see what things were like between Dreamflight and Thornbow during Honey's wrapping! We've gotten a few glimpses of their relationship, but it's great to see them interacting one-on-one about a sensitive subject like this. It was interesting to see how Thornbow both clashed with and supported Dreamflight - it's clear he cares about her but that he won't let her self-pity drag him down along with it.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2015-07-03
It's great to see this from Thrornbow's perspective. I think his POV was lacking since quite a while. I love the point he makes towards Dreamflight: She's an adult and she makes hr own desicions. I can only agree.
It's also neat to see hornbow making his own desicions to go on with his life and keep the memory of his sister tresured. he might agree or disagree with Greenweave's actions but he decides that it's not about him or his feelings towards his sister.
Very neat to finally see how he felt and thought about all this!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-06-27
I love how Thornbow wants to comfort Dreamflight, but only gets angry. At the same time, we really see the incredible depth and devotion to his family! He is a deeper character than most people might think! Great snapshot into his very being!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-06-25
Angie, this is so powerful and concise. I really appreciate what you've done with Thornbow here, and showing more of his backbone, and of what it seems to cost him to have to get firm with someone he loves. :)
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