Comments on 'After-Hours Confidant'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-01-08
I finally put two and two together after reading this story and realized who Thumbprint was supposed to talk to way back in another story - avoiding spoilers here as comment rules dictates, though I assume you as the author of this story has read that story ;) This was a very intriguing story, as well as an overview-creating one! I feel I have a much better grasp of what's going on in Underhaven now, when it comes to its secrets. And Forge and Deeproot interacting was both sweet and entertaining - what a lovely and loving couple! Deeproot seems a very clever and kind person, as well as set on higher ranks; it's always good to have a suppportive spouse when you have eyes aimed at the top.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-11-21
I sooo love those two together. You made them such an interesting couple! It is great to see the strong man behind the ambitious Second of Provision. They are a really good team and I am glad you were able to show this so well here.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2015-07-31
What strikes me the most here are the little things. I like how domestic this feels even though the couple is discussing such complex and somewhat dangerous topics - dangerous in a relative sense.
Love how tightly woven this whole storyline is. the names and links and how it all comes together.
I also just dig the interaction between the two of them and I like how Deeproot comes off here- Very neat and very telling of what kind of troll she is.
Well written and very intriguing on what#s going on beneath the elves in Underhaven.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-06-25
Oooh... They're such a fun pair. I really like the closeness and how they share things, though they're both bound to confidentiality... I also want to know what her plans are now!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-06-04
It's interesting to read about a population in the thousands than one in the dozens! The politics! The secrets! The ambition! Even the red tape had me drawn in! Very detailed and descriptive story. :)
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