Comments on 'Starting Over'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-03-04
This story started out breaking by heart in itty-bitty pieces, only to glue it back together and make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. It's great to see Dreamflight and Greenweave finally talk to each other - and it makes perfect sense that it ends up being Newt who is the catalyst to their dawning reunion. Lovely story!
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-05-19
What a sweet story! I really love the Dreamflight/Newt dynamic that you created here, it's really wonderful to have them show that sibling dynamic. And Dreamflight and Greenweave were just fantastic at the end, with Newt once again breaking the tension with a bit of comedy and care. So happy to have this to read! This is a huge step forward, and feels really tenderly handled. :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2015-05-16
Thanks Ingrit. I'm glad you like the story. It was a challenge for me to write this in so many ways.
Personally I hope Newt WON'T have to use his talents to help people much older then him to solve their problems. They should be capable to do this themselves ^^'.
Anyway, I hope this is something that helps all of them to move on.
Ingrid G.
New! Updated: 2015-05-14
Oh, Mel, THANK YOU so much for this story!! Finally, Dreamflight can go on with her life!!! I had outlined several stories where reconciliation would be possible and you did it in one!! Again, thank you! It was so great to see that Newt and Dreamflight truly are siblings at heart! As Willow heals the body, Newt heals the emotions as a mediator! Can't wait to see more stories where he shares this gift with other members of the tribe!!
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