Comments on 'Inspirations'

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Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2016-01-19
I really like seeing these two interact on an adult level. Foxtail is definitely changing, even if she initially thought it was for one reason, it seems to be growing on her. It suits her. I do love how Starskimmer is very open about how Foxtail keeps Notch out of trouble sometimes.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2015-11-21
What an interesting pairing! The banter and the teasing was fun to read. Those two women have quite a lot in common, coming to think of it.
But I would really like to know why Foxtail had come to Skimmer's den in the first place...
Mike H.
New! Entered: 2015-05-12
Starskimmer is very wise. Listen well young Foxtail. I don't know what I expected when I saw a story with the two of them but it really out did anything I could have anticipated. Nicely done.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2015-04-30
This is a combo of characters I'd like to see together more often! Since I can easily see how much they have in common. Both are pleasure-seekers, but Starskimmer is always so delightfully practical about it -- she's not just good at giving pleasure, but versed in so many ways to bring it about! Foxtail could truly learn things from her. :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2015-04-26
very sweet look at the two females here. I like how this showcases the similarities and differences a little and the hints and winks at Starskimmer's free spirit and her life philosophy.
It's a good one as well. Taking inspiration whenever it comes. I also like that it dose show her keen and sharp sense and how aware she is of all that goes on around her despite her being at risk coming off as an airhead, if you don't take the time to look into her.
The little pointers and hints at her relationships are nice too and I liked the bit where she more or less tells Foxtail to keep a close eye on her son in her own way and that she is aware of the nature of Notch just as well.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-04-21
Very vivid! I really like seeing this pair together - a bit unexpected, but it seems to work. You really highlighted both their personalities and Foxtail's recent character growth, with an interesting experiment filling the background with interesting smells and thoughts! Hope that Starskimmer's inspiration works out!
Jason B.
New! Updated: 2015-04-04
This was awesome! It was so descriptive of all the senses, I felt like I was there!
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-04-01
Starskimmer seems more, erm, "Open" about sexuality than most of the other elves LOL. I would NOT want to "date" Notch, only because of his mother's potential comments!! *blushing* .. For the story ~ I wonder what Foxtail was originally going to ask her?
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