Comments on 'Weight of Words'

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Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-11-09
This one was initially hard to write, b/c I was laughing when I thought of the bird and the yawn... reading it now, I can't help but feel sorry for her one one hand and ready to slap her on the other - at that point in her life, she was so bent on blaming anyone and anything for her misery. This story is a reminder of where she was at, and how far she's come.
Joanne P.
New! Entered: 2015-01-25
Darn that bird! Seems like Honey was making some progress and starting to see reason again, then that bird had to go and put her right back where she was.
Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2015-01-04
OMG, Poor Honey!! I can see how someone might deserve a stinky bladder sac explode on them, but no one, not any one, deserves bird poo in the mouth while yawning!!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2015-01-03
HUm. Honey on her self-pity party again. The poor girl really puts a lot into words and uses them like weapons and feels they are used as such against her. It's fascinating how much she reads into the things that hurt her and how she doesn't believe things that should tell her she's loved and was missed. It's a problem I am so familiar with in many forms. But haven't we all been there at some point?
Still I hoped to the end she'd at least grow out of this attribute a little. She was almost there.
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