Comments on 'A Perfect Day'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-03-04
Wonderful use of sending here! The way you described Kestrel's sharing of her decision and reasoning really sums up what an advantage telepathy is, as well as how intimate is is. Kestrel being a very, very old Wolfrider also came across beautifully here!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2015-01-16
This is such a lovely story and a great step in their relationship, Megan! I enjoyed Kestrel's musing about the life the three of them have built together and the love connecting them. The day really seemed perfect, and Kestrel's conclusion made it even more so! Love the atmosphere throughout the story, it gave me such a warm, peaceful feeling. And it's also great that Fadestar was there, too, it really underscores her place in this little family. Very sweet!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2014-12-29
Oh, a new turn in their relationship. I agree it was about time they make it official. Kestrel is very endearing here in her introspective and reflecting way to go over her feelings. I also like that it's no overly romantic look on how and why she and True Edge came together. That is a very smart move. It keeps the union they finally achieved very down to earth and all the more deserved.
I also like the atmosphere of this chilled and relaxed family day. It really seemed perfect and the Kestrel's conclusion in the end is the icing on the cake!
Wonderfully written as well. You do feel the love and warmth between all of them here.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-12-18
That's so sweet! I love how you take us along with Kestrel's thoughts and musings as she contemplates her life. The change of the status could be treated as a small thing, and yet you give it a real weight and warmth and meaning. I really love reading about a quiet, 'normal' day as well. This really left me feeling all warm and happy!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-12-17
What a lovely ending for the day but also for the whole story arc! I am happy for them.
I liked to read Kestrel's musing and to see how she came to love True Edge. Always wondered about that.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2014-12-09
Awwww... what a sweet way for them to end the day! I love True Edge's response to her sending. SO happy for them!:)
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