Comments on 'Skinning Rabbits, Mending Arms'
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New! Entered: 2015-01-06
|I *love* it when Cloudfern gets all growly and such. It's always good to see how assertive and wolfy he can be. Otter definitely deserves a good thrashing. Stubborn elf.|
New! Entered: 2014-12-06
|Oh, Sofia, I just love your take on Cloudfern. (I am sure I already mentioned that but cannot say it often enough.)|
It was pretty cool to see Cloudfern's wolfy side once in a while and that his patience has some limits as well.
I also like how you - just by mentioning some things - reminded us all on several ongoing story arcs and developments: the FO, Otter's growing rebelious behaviour, Greenweave and Cloudfern's hard time before Honey was wrapped and Otter's feelings for Newt. Very neat!
New! Entered: 2014-11-25
|Oh, interesting! Nice to see a follow up on the injuired arm of Otter's here. And I see hints of what Arthur and I planned to do a while back. Glad it came into play somehow :) |
It's a nice ominous and tense atmosphere here. It really shows how draining the time at BSC has been on all of them. It's also a really nice interaction between the two and I like the hints of there being something bigger in the bush but not adressed yet.
Also, very nicely written. I like the season related comparisons here *g*