Comments on 'Nap Time'
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New! Entered: 2016-08-21
|In the beginning I forgot that True Edge has done this twice before! So glad he has twins in his later years! No tantrums here.|
New! Entered: 2014-12-18
|I'll admit, throughout the whole time I was reading I was expecting tears, tantrums, and humour at the expense of True Edge. I really like what I found though, it's much better! True Edge has a very characteristic sense of confidence - and competence. I love his way of weaving a story for the boys. It's really great to see him with Kestrel and Snowfall, and really get immersed in the love and respect he has for both of them. And the family moments are incredibly precious. Happy sighs!|
New! Entered: 2014-12-14
|That was a sweet little look at the family here. As much the dynamic between Snowfall, Kestrel and True Edge as between True Edge and his sons. |
True Edge dose make a very chilled and proud impression here. Relaxing with his boys. I had to chuckle thinking what he'd do when one of the two grows up not being into the hunt at all, since he seems so exited about the time he finally can sit them on a wolf's back and ride into the hunt with them.
All in all a lovely little read.
New! Entered: 2014-12-06
|A lovely story! Seeing True Edge like this is so heart-warming. The pride in his sons is palpable in every word.|
Now, I guess every parent in our club is wishing for Sending skills. :D Pretty convenient!
New! Entered: 2014-12-04
|Thanks for tackling this, Mike! I love to see an every-day moment between True Edge and his new sons. I thought Kestrel and Snowfall's nervousness at leaving the babies, even for a bit, was very realistic. And the babies' reactions to True Edge's sending was so cute. Hope to see more of this :)|
New! Entered: 2014-11-18
|Oh, how sweet and precious this is! It brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely adore TrueEdge here and how he realizes a way to entertain his boys that would be within their developmental capability. I wish I had that talent!|