Comments on 'Just a Few More Tricks'

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Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-11-18
I love seeing how the pranksters are affecting the new generation. It makes me wonder who taught them? And thinking back farther and farther, and wondering what pranks no longer "exist" in this tribe's culutre... and if that's possible. Anyway... I love that Notch gets caught. It's my favorite part.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2014-12-16
Being a prankster seems to be more of a craft or art form to Notch and Foxtail. Heh. It was nice to see Foxtail interact with the kids and the image of Notch hanging there was hilarious! The writing here is endearing and sweet and fun.

I do like how easy Notch and Foxtail work off each other. They both seem to really handle the pranking as some kind of a way to get at each other but without being mean about it to each other. It's a game to outsmart the other. It truly shows their relationships.

But here I am and wonder what exactly this prank this was and how they turned it on him!!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-11-25
Poor everyone! If Notch and Foxtail "sell" their tricks to the next generation, it will NEVER end!! ;)
This is a fun bit of every day life at the Holt. I kinda missed to see Notch and Foxtail involved in pranks.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-11-20
Hehe, I wonder how long it'll take for a re-retaliation to get through the cubs from Notch to Foxtail? This was great, and left me with so many fun questions about the middle bit! It's great to see Foxtail handling all the cubs so easily and with the different tactics each needs. :D
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