Comments on 'Family News'
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New! Entered: 2016-05-11
|Pathmark gets new uncles!! What a nice balm to the loss of his parents years ago! Kestrel is more like a parent to him than Bowflight was. And it's easy to see that they are also friends!|
New! Entered: 2015-12-26
|Such a sweet moment! It's heart-warming how happy Pathmark is for Kestrel, as well as how he considers himself responsible for the cub once it's born. Family project indeed :)|
New! Entered: 2014-12-30
|This was such a lovely look at Pathmark and Kestrel's closeness. I especially liked that he felt comfortable including himself and inviting himself around to be there and help True Edge more - I'd love to see more of that pair interacting.|
Pathmark will be such a great example for his tiny uncles.
New! Entered: 2014-12-18
|It's touching how close this family is. Pathmark's joy seems so genuine and pure and I can see him being a truly good uncle to the babies. |
To me it's also striking how easy and naturally the love between Kestrel and Pathmark comes and plays out.
One line in this made me curious. I would like to see how Willow dealt with the loss of the first cub at some point, since Pathmark's musing about her feelings towards it are pretty sensible. Another thing I liked. He really considers the feelings of those close to him in a tragedy. It shows again what a sweet person he can be.
Nice look at how this pregnancy and project dose affect the tribe :)
New! Entered: 2014-12-08
|Awww, Pathmark is such a sweetie! I really like his view on the family he has right now and the positions his grandmother Kestrel filled in. He - as their nephew - will be a wonderful mentor and teacher for the two little boys.|
New! Entered: 2014-07-09
|I really like seeing Kestrel and Pathmark together as part of a multi-generational family. Pathmark's joy really shines through here - it's fantastic to see him so happy and without any jealous overlays. I'm really hoping to see this carried through in future stories, it'd be great to see Pathmark playing a sort of "Uncle" figure to the new boys!|
New! Entered: 2014-06-24
|I love that this takes a look at the way the Trio's pregnancy strongly affects others in the tribe, especially their close family. It's so touching to see how excited by it Pathmark is. It's a reminder of how close-knit all of the connections are, and how an event like this has an impact on everyone. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Pathmark being the doting nephew-turned-uncle. :)|