Comments on 'Apologies'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-07-04
It's hard to draw a relationship comic because there's not a lot of physical action. This was anything but boring. Good job!!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-12-08
Man, lovers can always bee so mean to each other. They know where it hurts the most, eh?! ;)
I really like how this story concludes, that is does not need many words to set things right again. It shows more than anything else, how close those two are.

Comics are so hard to do, but you did a great job here, Heidi, both with the pacing and the setting of the panels.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2014-10-07
I'm sorry I didn't personally comment sooner - at least, not here. You worked so hard on this story, and I think it came out beautifully, both artistically and emotionally. :)
Angie Cousins
New! Entered: 2014-06-30
Lovely, powerful graphics to go with a moving story, chock full of emotion and near-heartbreak!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2014-06-24
I'll save most of the comments for the individual pages, but -- congratulations on finishing this, Heidi! And I really liked the way you chose such a quiet, emotion-heavy topic for a graphic story. It's quite different from the others we've seen, and it goes to show that graphic stories aren't just good at conveying action -- they can be good for emotion as well.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2014-06-05
It's so nice to see more and more comic projects here. It dose make the holt a tad more lively as it is anyway. Since this is the story comment I'll focus on the story aspect here ;)

It might sound mean but... man I enjoy Willow wolfing out here. It makes her look like jerk but I kinda enjoy it that it shows couples have these moments when they just get into fights and misunderstandings and that the important part is that they can find a way to get over it in the end. It gives the relationship a bit more depth then just holding hands and being all into each other all the time.
I love how real Willow feels here. Knowing exactly that you are just mean and made someone cry but are to stubborn to admit it to yourself at the moment and then regretting it and fearing you messed it up for good. It makes Willow one of my favorites since she's flawed but not beyond seeing her own mistakes. It's very clear that a relationship like this is new to her but also that it's good for her.
Nice look into a more troubled moment between them and how they made a start to work on that.
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