Comments on 'Communication Issues'
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New! Entered: 2016-07-28
|It must be so much easier to communicate with your animal if they're part elf and you're part wolf! Like how the wolves are telepathic in their own unique way!|
New! Entered: 2014-12-10
|I always wondered what the wolves do during word hunts. Must be pretty boring for them to stay around, depending on the human's movement that keeps their elves moving or staying on the spot for quite a while. No wonder Rooter was curious!|
It is cool to see the different personalities and differing intellect of our wolves from time to time.
New! Entered: 2014-10-14
|Angie, thanks again for this story! It was so much fun to read. I love that we can see some of Rooter's throwback characteristics shining through :)|
New! Entered: 2014-04-11
|Poor Beetle! I feel for her here. It's kind of neat to see that although Rooter is very suited to her, as a wolf-friend, in a lot of ways, they don't always see eye-to-eye, as it were. I also like Foxtail's casual, easy companionship here; she really seems like a good friend to Beetle.|
New! Updated: 2014-03-12
|It's always nice to see a friendship explored. Foxtail and Beetle make an odd couple but you can see here how it would work ^^ |
The wolves here are adorable too. I like how they both come off as wolves but do have distinctive personalities.
I admit i'd have loved to see the bit where Foxtail and Beetle actually did have the moment of tension instead being told about it afterwards. But I get that it's not the focus of the story. Still it would have been nice to see a direct consequence of the communication issue.
Still a very sweet read on this one. ^^
New! Entered: 2014-03-01
|Interesting look at the bond between elf and wolf here! Definitely brings in mind a bit of reward-training that my housemates are using for their dog. Foxtail and Beetle are a great combination here, and the way Briarfoot jumped into the conversation was fantastic! Interesting to think about too; that Rooter's elf blood doesn't necessarily make the wolf easier to communicate with or control.|