Comments on 'Three Heads Are Better'

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Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-12-10
So good to see those three together. Pranksters galore!!!
What I struck me most was the comment about how Foxtail and Willow had an understanding on sharing men and powers. Made me think. But you must be right: with two such powerful, dominant women there must have been some competition and jealousy in the past.
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2014-10-03
I thought for sure I had commented on this! First of all, thank you for writing this. It was such a joy to see these three together. I love how you've nailed the friendly bickering, the scheming, and the playfulness that is common among these guys but should be showcased more! :)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-06-26
I'm cozy in bed as I read this and the story made me feel even cozier, despite it being summer right now. Few things are better than getting to go to sleep somewhere warm after being out in cold weather. Seeing the famous prank trio in action - though sleepy action - was a treat, letting me get to know the dynamics of their relationship better. Now, if you'll excuse me, I must snuggle further into my bed and enjoy just how comfy it is.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2014-03-09
Oh these three are fun together. I like seeing Notch being a grump here. Clearly stuck with something and frustrated about it. In contrast the two ladies are so cheeky and lighthearted. This one dose creat pictures in my mind of the trios movements, expressions and gestures. Very nicely done and I like the sense of companionship between Foxtail and WIllow even through it seems to be a balance act still but this time on move safe ground.
Love them sicking their heads together and how cozy the whole scene sees to be despite all else.
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2014-02-18
I like the lightheartedness of this fic :) These three are such a fun and interesting combination. I, too, which I knew what happens next ;)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2014-02-06
A nice look at what is probably a scene that repeated itself many times. :) I particularly like the idea of the two ladies being in such rapport; especially after the rocky beginnings of Foxtail trying to join their clique.
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2014-01-23
You have a line in there about Willow sitting up and asking a question with "absolute sweetness" -- that gives me the giggles each and ever time I read it! Lovely look at these three troublemakers. (I do miss seeing Rainpace as being part of Notch's life, though)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2014-01-18
This is just too fun! The three of them together is just TROUBLE! I'd love to know what happened next, and to whom.
Kyna Hansen
New! Entered: 2014-01-14
I gotta admit it took me a couple rereads to understand what Notch was talking about. A little too much dialog-jumping for my taste. Still, nice to see those three friends being themselves.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-01-08
Hehe, ooh, these three are a scary combination. :D Great to see the snuggles and the plotting together. I really love the bickering between Willow and Notch at the beginning, and the way that Foxtail seems to fit right into it when she appears. Great work with the dialogue. I like how you left some of the details for the reader's imagination to fill in with the plotting!
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