Comments on 'Changing Your Skin'

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Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-12-23
Heh, I liked to see how well those two know each other. I am sure Foxtail sensed that her aunt wanted to only tease her in her responses. And the younger elf knew how to show the most pleasing behaviour. Sorry, maybe I am doing Foxtail injustice here but I still do not trust that little vixen. ;)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2014-10-07
I enjoyed this because for some reason I tend to think of Foxtail's changes more in terms of before and after her mother's death. This story reminded me that it started earlier - and that it runs deeper.
Teresa Inocencio
New! Entered: 2014-02-02
good story, It really shows how the younger is trying to be more adult. I like how they interact together.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2013-09-26
I really liked that this story reflected on the history of Foxtail's relationship with her aunt -- how it goes back to childhood, and how Nightstorm has watched Foxtail grow through all of her moods and wild swings. It's also a bit of a reminder that Nightstorm can have a similarly mercurial nature. A really nice perspective on Foxtail's growing maturity.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2013-08-27
Ahhh that's how the new outfit came to be. Sweet. It's nice to see Nightstorm and Foxtail interact here and another nice look into Foxtail growing and how the elves around her react to that.
And it's neat to see more of Nightstorm. She dose show character here and I like it. None to be fooled but eager to create. And man you can sense how much nerves it must have coast Foxtail to be as patient as she was here XD
It's also nice to get the sense of a friendship between the two here.
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