Comments on 'I Understand Now, Father'
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New! Entered: 2016-01-19
|This is so emotional, so sad. It makes Owl that much more sympathetic, even in the madness he developed because of all the loss.|
New! Entered: 2014-12-23
|Oh, wow, what a strong and emotional story. Like Mel, it made me tear up. I have note realized how tragic some of your Ancestor's lives had been. And that history repeated itself... for identical reasons. So incredibly sad!!|
New! Entered: 2013-08-28
|This is heartbreaking :( The way you wrote it is so emotionally, talking right to my heart! I think I could understand why Owl became mad a little bit better now...If I were a healer and could not save my children and lifemate...thats just painful and horrible. But I love how strong Wren is ...she just went away to rescue her child...but that she did not have success in the end is so sad!!|
It was interesting for me to read something about deceased characters, I looked up Wren and Owls realtionships, their children and Toss's past.
New! Entered: 2013-08-27
|OPw... Ow.. This seriously made me tear up. It's written in such a down to earth voice that made it all the more painful I was doubtful of Toss action but this I can get behind 100%. |
When reading this I was wondering "Wait.. didn't Wren... oh! oh..." It is all the more painful too know Owl couldn't save Reed either :(
It's a nice character piece for Wren and it makes the slip into insanity for owl yet more understandable. It's great how you managed to create such a feel of dire straits and hope that gives a small feel of what was going on during the winter sickness.
" Before he grew too weak he called out to Magpie, not even aware that his friend is dead."
This got me as well. It's so .. sad. I felt Wren's heart breaking for her son. Every line is strong here and used to great effect in my humble opinion. Great work.