Comments on 'The Perfect Gift'

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Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2014-12-30
This is a nice look at the process of choosing. And I liked the point that the "perfect gift" has double meanings! :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2014-04-11
I particularly like that there's a sort of double-meaning to the title; that Knifemaker is working on a gift, but that this is her gift, her skill, as well -- to be able to find just the right kind of stone and to be able to shape it so well. I like the way the stone speaks to her.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2013-09-15
A wonderfully captured moment! Really got the reader into the character's mind; I related very much to this, though when I make something I'm usually just looking for the right words ;)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2013-07-19
Very sweet look into the mentality of a craftsman (Women in this case). It's a nice callback to the fact that crafters kinda do look for the right things in their material to get out of it what they want in contrast to the rock-shaper who dose have the ability to just make it the way they want.
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