Comments on 'Boom!'
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New! Entered: 2015-12-27
|Great look at how hunting is done among the River Twine elves! And a great look at Thornbow in particular, and how he interacts with his bond-friend Thief - no two wolves are ever alike, after all, and getting a look at how well they get along with their bond is always interesting.|
New! Entered: 2014-12-23
|What a great team Thornbow and Thief are! So nice to read something about the blond elf. We see so few of him.|
New! Entered: 2014-10-01
|I like that you capitalized on the grouse's mating call to show Thornbow locating them, and how even though it's brief, this gives a great look at a hunter working in tandem with his wolf. It's also a nice reminder that even small prey is valuable.|
New! Updated: 2014-08-30
|That's really cool! I learned something about grouse today; and popped over to YouTube to find some recordings. Nicely done! The scene was a really cool glimpse into both some prey-species behaviour and to Thornbow's quiet and patient hunting.|
New! Entered: 2013-07-19
|This is beautifully and succinctly written! I like how descriptive you are with it and how I can "see" what's happening.|
New! Entered: 2013-07-17
A sweet, short and quick snapshot of a hunter poking in a nest of prey. I like the opening and I like how quick it goes over. It has the feel of a lucky moment paired with the skills to take advance of it.