Comments on 'Control'
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New! Entered: 2016-01-08
|This told me a lot about who Stillpoint is, even if the story was told from Cog's point of view. That she's prone to long lectures about safety wasn't too unexpected, judging from her CIS's description of her views on keeping tinkering a not-harmful thing. But having Cog not receive such a lecture in a situation like this spoke volumes.|
New! Entered: 2015-07-02
|Every time I read about the Trolle, I'm fascinated anew by their society! They are technically so advanced and the Elves are nearly stuck in Stone Age (in comparison with our world)! I wonder why the Trolls had such a technical evolution, but I have an idea why... |
Still I love how you worked out the differnces in the personalities of the two trolls here and Cog fascinates me and I want to know how his career goes on!
New! Entered: 2014-12-28
|The trolls have explosives??? Man, I am so looking forward to the society and technology clash when elves and trolls finally meet. ;)|
It is a curious thing that Cog interprets Stillpoints words as a kind of permission to go on with his experiments. I wonder if she did it on purpose.
New! Entered: 2013-07-18
|This was a nice one. It did flow nicely and I like the point Stillpoint makes about being able to control yourself before you are able to control anything else. |
The idea of trolls being able to do controlled explosions is somewhat scary. It seems to be used for construction only at this point but uhhhh... my corrupted human mind was on warfare right away. Scary thought.