Comments on 'A Hunter's Gift'
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New! Entered: 2015-02-24
|What a sweet story! I like how he plans something for his lifemate and how he imagines giving it to her.|
New! Entered: 2015-02-09
|Aw this is a cute little story. I really love how you've managed to show both how Bowflight feels about his lifemate and what he had planned to make for her. Lovely little insight into his life.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-23
|Such a sweet glimpse at Bowflight and Finch's relationship! (Though I can't help but feel sorry for the ravens - poor things just wanted a meal).|
New! Entered: 2014-04-11
|I really like how this shows Bowflight turning an everyday activity like hunting into another way to demonstrate his love for Finch -- and also how the wolfriders use bits and pieces from the world around them for decorative purposes. The idea of his gift sounds really lovely.|
New! Entered: 2014-03-03
|My story came first and afterwards Joanne made the wonderful illustration in addition.|
I'm happy that you like it, the idea just came suddenly to me. I think Bowflight and Finch were very well suited as lifemates, but that's just my opinion. ;)
New! Entered: 2013-08-09
|What a lovely snipped. I really liked to see this scene from the eveveryday life of our elves.|
New! Entered: 2013-07-14
|This is a nice little glimpse into how Bowflight regards his lifemate and that he is indeed very thoughtful when it comes to her. |
I do wonder which came first. This little story or the wonderful illustration.
A very shot and sweet piece.