Comments on 'Spearfishing'
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New! Entered: 2015-03-09
|I like this little glimpse at the trio fishing! Very fun.|
New! Entered: 2014-12-29
|Lovely little snippet that immediately let Afke's picture pop up in my head.|
New! Entered: 2014-07-31
|You accomplished a lot in a little, here! It makes for a great accompaniment to the calendar-page-as-illustration, but I especially liked that you took the time to paint such a vivid picture of the day and how it feels. Even though the calendar page gives us a visual, this piece does a nice job engaging other senses too.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-13
|Great little slice-of-life snippet!|
New! Entered: 2013-07-13
|Sweet and short. I like the first sentences. The picture you draw with words here is great. I also like the bit of history that developed with this clue. The idea of an annual fishing trip for these three is kinda sweet. |
Lovely work on this. Short but very atmospheric.