Comments on 'Spearfishing'

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Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2015-03-09
I like this little glimpse at the trio fishing! Very fun.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-12-29
Lovely little snippet that immediately let Afke's picture pop up in my head.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2014-07-31
You accomplished a lot in a little, here! It makes for a great accompaniment to the calendar-page-as-illustration, but I especially liked that you took the time to paint such a vivid picture of the day and how it feels. Even though the calendar page gives us a visual, this piece does a nice job engaging other senses too.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-13
Great little slice-of-life snippet!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2013-07-13
Sweet and short. I like the first sentences. The picture you draw with words here is great. I also like the bit of history that developed with this clue. The idea of an annual fishing trip for these three is kinda sweet.

Lovely work on this. Short but very atmospheric.
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