Comments on 'The Stars Shine Cold'
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New! Entered: 2016-02-18
|Honey actually did not want much. She wanted to love and be loved in return. I hope one day she gets her wish!!|
New! Entered: 2015-04-30
|It's good to see an overall look at Honey's life, as it underscores how far she has come. And I liked the motif of the "cold" stars, representing the constant of time, perhaps of the Way, and how the world goes on, indifferent to her passions.|
New! Updated: 2014-08-09
|Chilling and with a great rhythm to the lines! Honey's life sure hasn't been easy, even though that's been her own fault for a few of those bad times.|
New! Entered: 2013-06-08
|Honey's emotional state has always been somewhat fascinating to me. :) The thing that always struck me the most was how, well, explosive she could be with everyone and everything else so seemingly calm by contrast if not in actuality! The idea with the stars was kind of an extension of that thought process. :) Glad you guys liked it! Thanks. :)|
New! Updated: 2014-11-18
|Well-written. It makes it easy to be sympathetic to Honey, who really *is* sympathetic, and not a bad elf. :)|
edited: I like the snapshot summaries of different points in her life. When you look past the occasional histrionics, she is such a likeable elf :)
New! Entered: 2013-04-10
|That was very pretty, Razzle. I like the only constant thing here being the line about the stars. It really takes home the idea behind this. Poor honey really had a lot to deal with during her life. It's nice to see it run down like this and all the hints at stories we did see up to this point. |
Wonderfully done. It almost could be turned into a song :D