Comments on 'Redbird'
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New! Entered: 2016-04-11
|I like this Slice of Life, back when Notch was Coyote and Willow and Pathmark's parents were both alive! ... Also appreciate how kind Pathmark is ~ after all, they ARE siblings! ;) He is so sweet to bring in all her traps!!|
New! Entered: 2014-05-30
|Yeah, I really thought this was very clever -- picking up on different, unrelated pieces of art, but making them fit together as one story. And I appreciated that it showed snapshots of just normal tribal life, enriching our view of the way the tribe interacts. (Also I feel that we just never get to see enough of Willow's family, and I like that.)|
New! Entered: 2014-04-24
|Always great to get to see some everyday interaction between the elves of Rivertwine! The flashback was a lovely addition, really underlining the shared history between the tribe's members.|
New! Entered: 2013-05-05
|This is such a sweet story! I must echo what others have said about piecing the three pieces of art together in the story. It seems as if the pictures were created for the story and not the other way around. :) I really liked the glimpse of Willow, Pathmark and their family! :)|
New! Entered: 2013-04-08
|Congrats on how you pieced these different snapshots in time together -- that's a fantastic challenge, and you've really pulled it off nicely here!|
New! Entered: 2013-03-07
|I really like how you take some (seemingly) unrelated pictures and turn them into a story! This one even blends together three of them - wow!|
The story itself is just cute - it's really nice to see Willow and Rainpace like this, their interaction is very easygoing and comfortable. And the scene with Willow's family and friends is very lovely, too - nice characterisation for everyone around, and I especially liked seeing more of Finch and Bowflight!
New! Entered: 2013-02-23
|It's interesting to see how you tie together pictures to make them a story. That's a nice idea and I wonder if that would maybe work as a contest to take two kinda unrelated pictures and challenge the writers to come up with a story that fits them...|
Anyhow. This is a nice story and looking out the window... yeah I feel this. It's a nice atmosphere and I do like the interaction shown here. It might just be me, but I think we rarely saw Rainpace's and Willow's friendship like this. Easy and comfortable, thinking of each other and caring.
I also like to see the interaction between Willow and her family and friends. The guessing about coloring in nature was kinda cute ;) A part of me would like to join in and talk about color codes in nature :P
The interaction here all come off as very natural and fitting for the characters.