Comments on 'From the Belly of the Boar'
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New! Entered: 2016-07-30
|I have a feeling there's more where that came from! Hope there's a Part Two!!|
New! Entered: 2015-02-01
|Interesting. These are two Elves I don't expect to see hunting. Oh, and the boar frightened me, good for Chicory that Beetle had her bow ready! And I wonder if the Elves ever found out, what it was what they found.|
New! Entered: 2014-12-29
|Huh, what one can find in boar's entrails!!! It is like a surprise egg! ;)|
I liked to see Beetle and Chicory together. As far as I know this is a rare combination. And yes, Rainpace will have some words with his Recognized! She will feel as if she were Glow... if she stays long enough to listen.
New! Entered: 2014-04-13
|Great call back to the death of Beetle's bond! And the action was good too - as was the mystery inside the boar. I'm curious to find out what it is and where the elves having it will lead to.|
New! Entered: 2014-04-11
|I like how much is going on here -- from the action at the start, with both of these females shown in an action role they don't normally get to shine in, to the way the incident turns into a serendipitous discovery at the end.|
New! Entered: 2014-01-28
|What did they find here, and where does this storyline go next?|
New! Entered: 2013-05-05
|It was fun to write, and I, too, wonder what happened next. Maybe sometime, we'll all get to find out.|
New! Entered: 2013-02-19
|I thought it was an interesting way to find a human artifact and to show how having the humans around affect the elves in unexpected ways.|
New! Entered: 2013-02-18
|Yay, right into the action we go. Very nice to see the typical way those stories work turned upside down. From the climax at the beginning and easing into a quite scene. |
I have to admit, at some points I was confused about who did wahtm, but that could be me reading this waay to early in the morning.
Anyhow, it's nice to see some call backs to past stories here. I think I know what they found ;) I'm curious if there will be follow ups for this story and the mysterious find. ;)