Comments on 'Silent Night'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-03-31
I would love to see stories of the two babies as they get older ~ surely they would have been like siblings! Milk siblings at least! LOL
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2014-12-29
Hah, never occured to me that gliders would make good rocking chairs or push chairs to make babies sleep. But well, why not? Must be a marvelous feeling for them to fall asleep in the night sky.
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2014-09-02
This story was quite lovely, and calm. I really enjoyed seeing the interactions between Beesting, Kestrel and Raven. It was too cute! I loved that the babes were sending images of what they wanted it was really interesting, and a great way for them to communicate their needs.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2014-06-01
Oh! This is an interaction that we hadn't seen before, and I'm really glad to see it. It makes me wonder what the relationship was between Kestrel and Beesting, before they had the connection of both being mothers of young cubs at the same time.
Sofia Lindstrm
New! Entered: 2014-04-21
It's so handy that elf babies can send, if only simple feelings and images! No wonder they're quieter than human babies. Lovely look back at young Kestrel and a nice insight into how elves help raise each other's children!
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-01-29
Really vivid imagery here! I like the easy sharing of kids here, and the sending from the babies is a really cool touch. Beautiful winter night scene, I really like the familiarity here between Beesting and Kestrel. It'd be interesting to see more of Moon and Raven too as they grow up!
Heidi Henderson
New! Entered: 2013-01-18
It's nice to get to see some of Kestrel's interactions with past tribemates. Sometimes it's easy to forget how old she is currently. It's also neat to read this story and reflect on what happened to her in the near RTH-past.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2013-01-17
This has such a lovely mood - I just love the image of the two elves with the babes in their arms spending some time under the stars! Very sweet and calm, and the interaction is very nice.

I especially loved how the babes are communicating through sending. Lucky elf mothers, they are able to know what their babies want (most of the time)!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2013-01-15
Merry Christmas, Megan! :) It was a lot of fun to write this... an idea conceived on a rare perfect winter night w/ one of my kiddos. :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2013-01-15
This was a sweet one.
The image of two friends holding babies and going for a walk in a clear winter night is truly beautiful. I like the interaction and somehow I never really thought about Moon and Raven being born so close to each other. It's neat to know a black haired babe with golden eyes and a white haired with grey /silvery eyes were around at the same time.

Loved the little moment where Kestrel thought about her own future by holding a babe. Sweet moment and nice interaction between some beloved tribemates here.
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