Comments on 'Soul Reunion'

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Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2014-09-02
This piece is so bittersweet and I love it, and it was titled perfectly. It really got me in those last couple of lines, great job! :)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-21
The parallell between regrowth after a forest fire and this new Recognition was beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. Very touching!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-12-16
I love the title. That Recognition a 2nd time is kind of a soul reunion. And I wonder... how much deeper might the connection be?
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-12
I really like the way you picked up on the characters' history, and how they Recognized again not long after losing a first child. Really nice look at what a repeat Recognition is like! How the experience doesn't get old, but brings joy every single time.
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-11-08
Even though this poem is short, there is no lack of emotion in it! I definitely got a sense of Summer's surprise at Recognizing again, her happiness at the realization that she will get to be a mother again, and, as Melanie said, perhaps some melancholy at the end. Lovely to read.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-10-18
I actually wrote this in succh a short amount of time that it took a couple minute after I was done for the story of the poem to actually hit me emotionally! :) Hopefully that method of writing so fast helped impart some of the feeling of suddeness I associate with Recognition.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-11
This is lovely but it also has such a melancholic touch . Sweet one.
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