Comments on 'The Rockshaper of Greenstone Mountain'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a negative comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, genuine personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Submitted ByComment
Lea R.
New! Entered: 2014-12-25
Crackle's imagination is as funny as ever. And I love the "dastardly revenge". And Chicory's answer tops it all. I wonder how Crackle put up with her idea!
Joan Milligan
New! Entered: 2014-08-22
Dastardly revenge indeed! Isn't that just like Crackle, I can just picture her laughing as Glow runs off. Clever of Chicory to throw it right back in her face!
Teresa Inocencio
New! Entered: 2014-02-02
haha, that's cute. crackle's going to get an earful
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-23
This was so, SOOOOO cute and funny! LOL! :D I really love how Chicory handled the situation, and Glow's adorable certainty that the story is so true. I get the impression that something of a story-war may be brewing, with Glow scampering back and forth between the tellers... ;)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-23
This was so funny I had to read it aloud to my sister. She laughed too :)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-12-18
I love Chicory's way with cubs, and not just her daughter. Crackle should have known better than to mess w/ Glow! :) I also like how this reminds us that Crackle, while growing up, still likes to have fun with some of her stories.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-06
I love how this portrays the credulousness of a small child -- ready to believe Crackle, and then, just as ready to believe her mother's addition to the story. I do have a feeling that this isn't the end of the matter, and that Chicory had better watch out for what Crackle comes up with next!
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-10-31
I have to wonder if Crackle has been taking lessons from Notch in making up stories to tell the younger ones! I'd be interested to see what Crackle makes of this new part of the story that Chicory came up with!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-09-19
Hahaha, thanks for making me smile. Lovely, little snipped of every day life in the Holt. I can imagine that Crackle has lots of fun telling the many cubs scary stories. Loved to see Chicorys reaction to it. I hope for her, it worked in the end (but can imagine that Crackle could even top this.)
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-09-10
This was very cute :). A nice little mother-daughter moment, though I'm sure Crackle will have no problem topping that. Little Glow sure is a great audience for any storyteller!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-09-10
Somehow, the image alone of little Glow wrapping her mouth around the term "dastardly revenge" just gives me the giggles!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-10
Oh I am sure Crackle will find a way to top that. hehe.
That's a cute little mother and daughter Moment and I really like seeing the new generation getting all corrupted by Glow in a way XD
Login to add or edit your comments.

Back to Top | Home Page

Home | Characters | Art | Fiction | Resources | Links | Messageboard | Contact | Member Login

[Visual Design: Ellen Million | Sidebar Art: Rachel Vardys | Coding and maintenance: Ron Swartzendruber]
[No portion of this site's content may be used or copied without prior, written consent.]
[Send comments or questions about the site to help@rivertwine.com | Report Web errors to webmaster@rivertwine.com | Page Last Modified 29SEP2012 01:17:35 | Exec 0.008 secs]

'ElfQuest' is a registered trademark. © Copyright Warp Graphics, Inc. All rights reserved worldwide. We're just playing in this sandbox!