Comments on 'Treewee Wants Beesweets'

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Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2014-10-09
Aw! This story was very cute! I enjoyed seeing Sunlight care for little treewee, and how she got Tallow to share with the cub. I also enjoyed seeing Tallow in this story, I love that she whines a bit about having to share but when it comes down to it she really has no problem doing so.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-14
How cruel to tease the poor cub with candy within such close reach ;) Great to get to know these tribemates a little, even if they're no longer with us.
Beth K.
New! Entered: 2014-04-10
Cute! It's great to see the three of them together in a happy story! :) Treewee's so cute here, I love the imagery of her wanting a topknot and sucking on her fingers while she waits for a treat - really realistic! As well as Sunlight's comment about cubs keeping her running. Great to see her and Beesting's personalities shine out here. :)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-12-18
Littl Treewee is so precious!!! I love the image of the babe sucking on her fingers in anticipation of the sweets. I also like the characterization of Beesting :)
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-12-12
What a fun snapshot in time! I think it was brilliant of both you and Peggy to show us Tallow as just a little kid here -- it really reinforces the scope of our club's timeline. A very fun fic! And I'm craving candy now...
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-12
This was a lot of fun to write for Peggy's picture! :D I have to say, I also liked the idea of a happy little scene for the three of them, when I tend to remember ancestors like these by their dramatic and saddening deaths.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-06
I really like how this shows a cheerful, fun-loving side to Beesting, who I always think of as somewhat serious. I like this dimension to her! It's cute that she hesitates before sharing her prize with the others, even though Sunlight knows that she "always does". It also does a lot to show the relationship between the two, which is neat.
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-10-31
It's nice to see a short, sweet, slice of life scene between these three. Interesting idea to set it when Tallow was a cub. I enjoyed seeing the differing, but compatible, personalities of Beesting and Sunlight.
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-09-09
Oh, my, what a sweet, sweet story (even literally! haha). I loved to see you describe all the little details I put into the pic. Everything fits together so smoothely. It's also nice to see Beesting and Sunlight as friends, who know each other so well.
Now, you made my sweet tooth throbbing, too. *off to search for some chocolate*
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
Aww, this was so sweet! I agree with Mel that it's especially nice to have a story celebrating the life of these three instead of dealing with their deaths for a change. I had to laugh at the image of little Treewee with the topknot on top of her head, such a little girl hairdo! I also love Beesting's cheekiness and Sunlight's patience. Just lovely!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
After all the deep grief struck stories about the three this is a welcome breather. It's nice to see them alive and so comfortable around each other.
It's a sweet little story and I really enjoy getting a look at them here :) Little Tallow is really too cute and I really like Sunlight in this.
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