Comments on 'A Brother's Excitement'

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Ingrid G.
New! Entered: 2016-02-29
It's hard to imagine Notch ever being CUTE LOL! But that is so adorable here!! Stories aren't the only things he'll teach her!!
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2015-03-07
Aww, what a sweet drabble. It looks like a perfect family picture. I have to say, though, that I don't associate Notch with "stories to tell" but more with "which pranks to learn." XD
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-23
Adorable! I like how you focused on the idea of the storytelling rather than the fish themselves in your answer to this clue! :) And if I don't miss my guess, Starskimmer will soon be asleep as well... ;)
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-22
What a sweet little moment! Always nice to see the genuine affection Notch has for his sister.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-06
Oh boy, and we know what some of those stories are going to turn out to be, too! :D Still, you get the feeling that Coyote's heart is in the right place. Really, it's a wonder that Beetle turned out so practically-minded, given what her brother would go on to fill her little head with!
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-10-31
What a cute little story - and at the same time a little ominous O_o If only Starskimmer knew what her son was thinking!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-09-20
Awww, what a sweet little snippet! Very lovely description of mother and daughter... and the proud brother, of course.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
Ah, this is both lovely and ominous - I love the foreshadowing here. The stories he did tell her :D ... I especially liked that he was so intent on being the best big brother ever - such a Notch thing, and nevertheless so sweet ^^.
Joanne P.
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
A short story, but it brings the image so clear to mind - the weary Starskimmer dealing with both the new baby and the excited older child. I bet it was hard for him to wait until she was old enough to tell stories to.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
O such a nice quick snapshot of coyote when little laughter was born
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-07
Lovely Drabbel and so neat in it'S foreshadowing. Oh yes all the stories he could tell her :D
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