Comments on 'No Joke'

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Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2016-01-08
This poem has a great rhythm to it and it really lets you get to know Stillpoint! No wonder she's in the position she has in Underhaven, with an attitude like this.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-12-18
This is such a good piece for showing us the *why* behind Stillpoint's seriousness and difficulty with humor. I love that she sees the safety of all as an important priority.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
I really like how this poem shows Stillpoint's serious side... but also how that is related to her dedication and concern for her fellow trolls. It really brings her to life and makes her quite sympathetic.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-10-18
I was totally inspired for this by Peggy's lovely picture, of course. :) I wanted to do the perfectionism I saw in the illo justice with the poem, and I hope I did! I also had fun doing a piece in such a different "feel" overall since it's a troll character rather than the elves I'm used to writing about! :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-07
Very nice :) I like the non-nonsense feel of this and I love how much devotion to her place and her function in the society she shows in this. I'd say it's not necessarily you best poem but it''s really gripping in it's theme and meaning :)
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