Comments on 'Measuring for a New Coat'

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Lea R.
New! Entered: 2014-12-25
Haha! This must have been a really embarassing mishap for Blacksnake! I like his grumpyness and True Edge's gloating. I guess such things don't happen often for Blacksnake?
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-23
LOL! I kinda had the feeling that the only thing that could make Blacksnake that particular shade of grouchy would've been *some* sort of embarassing mishap -- and I wasn't disappointed! ^_^
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-21
Blacksnake, Blacksnake, pride does go before fall you know XD Liked the twist at the end; the start had be thinking something tragic or violent had happened, which made the actual reason for the coat's ruination even funnier.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-07
I like how this gives more of a look at the scene the artwork illustrates, but it still leaves some questions unanwered -- Blacksnake's growling makes me feel like there's more to the story than JUST a slip. ;-)
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-10-31
This is a great imagining of the story behind Karena's calendar pic. I had always wondered exactly what True Edge was saying to them, and why Blacksnake seemed to be a bit annoyed. Funny, too, how Whitney's fic fits so well as a sequel to yours!
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-09-23
Great piece to go with the illustration! I especially liked the description of Moss measuring and how confident he was, despite the bad mood Blacksnake was in! Like Peggy said, it's nice to see that there wasn't anything very dramatic behind it, just a mishap - which may make for a nice story nevertheless ;).
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-09-20
I liked this turn of events. First one thinks something meaningful must have happened like a bear attack or such... and then Blacksnake (Blacksnake of all!) just had a mishap. Nice backgroudn to the pic.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
I am glad there's a story to go with the art!! And whits story is a great counterpart!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-09-05
Poor Moss -- he's so confident while in the middle of these too, I think I'd be more scared, myself! Blacksnake's annoyance here is so palpable!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-05
It's fun how well this goes with Whiney's story. They seem to fit back to back actually.
Love how Moss seems to e in the middle here and TrueEdge's "I told you" attitude and his amusement. It goes quite nice with the picture I think :)
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