Comments on 'Daydreams of Death'

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Lea R.
New! Entered: 2015-06-06
Oh, that was captivating! We have so rarely the view of the preservers on certain events! And I love the form of the poem, it gives a nice read and it's really enthralling even if it's short. And for once I'm with Mushrooms gloom here, they were really lucky this time!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-21
Mushroom is, I think, my favorite preserver. It has such a distinct personality and a great backstory. Love that it got its own poem!
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-12-18
I think we often forget about the preseervers and the idea that they, too, have perspective on what's happening around them. Seeing the storyline from Mushroom's perspective is so neat!
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
I'm really glad that you seized on the idea to do this from Mushroom's perspective! It serves as a great reminder that the Preserver (and its memories) is a key part of this storyline, when otherwise, it can be hard to remember from moment to moment that its there. It reminds me that Mushroom played such a crucial role during the first encounter with the Fierce Ones -- if not for it being there, we wouldn't have Brightwood with us now!
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-10-18
This was fun to write! I wanted to do something for the recent story with Farscout and Fadestar, and liked the idea of using a third person for the perspective. :) This was an odd mix of fun and chilling to write, actually!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-03
I thought this was a great idea Razzle. I like it that's written out of Mushroom's perspective and I think it has just the right length. I think the theme fits very well with the little doom prayer here.
Love the flow and the rhythm as well. Very very cool!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-09-03
This was a very clever idea and very well executed! As a reader, I found it difficult to stay engaged with this much Preserver-speak in one sitting -- but you were wise enough to keep the poem relatively short. Huzzah!
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