Comments on 'New Needles'

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Beth K.
New! Entered: 2015-11-18
This is really cute, and makes me a bit sad that it's just such a short glimpse at these two! I really like their playful words, there's the sense of a lot of love there in a very short scene.
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2015-03-07
Heehee, I had to laugh. It does loook a bit excessive to go hunting for a pair of needles.... but Bearheart is so good-natured about it. I love how this short paragraph shows us so much about the two characters :)
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2014-12-14
This is a fun little blurb of a story, even with it being so short you get the full picture, very nicely done. I laughed, hope they ate well.
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2014-04-21
Funny little slice-of-life moment! What won't lifemates do for each other ;)
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
What a lovely snippet! And straight out of elf live.
It is also great that you choose ancestors for this.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-07
I get a slight sense here that Bearheart took the challenge on himself because he thought it would be fun to measure himself against a sawtooth! Why do things the EASY way?
Megan McCarthy
New! Entered: 2012-10-31
I love how every story involving the sawtooth showed or mentioned someone getting bitten, but each story went a different way with it. Your approach is lighthearted and a bit humorous. I was very impressed with your ability to make such a complete scene with only 100 words.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-09-09
Heehee! I love this drabble and it left me with a snicker at the end. :) I like how poor Dreamberry reacted to her lifemate's actions, and how he shrugs off the consequence. ;)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-02
They're such a cute couple (at least, it seems that way from the drabble). :) I like their brief conversation - it' so telling!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-02
Lovely. It's always nice to see ancestors at work and I love Bearhearts practical view and devotion to his lifemate here. Such a cute couple!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-09-02
This is a delightful drabble! I love their easy banter, and it just left me smiling!
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