Comments on 'Teeth'

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Lea R.
New! Entered: 2015-06-30
Nice poem! I liked the flow of it and it even rhymes! Great job! For me it's a small insight in how the wolfriders fish and the end made me chuckle. Very humorous!
Sofia Lindström
New! Entered: 2012-12-23
Nice, fast-paced poem! Liked the rhythm of it.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
I love the rhyme scheme for this poem, and the way it really sets up a rollicking rhythm! Great job telling such a full story even within the confines of the rhyme. And I love how the story is dramatic but light-hearted, and goes so well with Peggy's picture! For me, the combo is very reminiscent of A.A. Milne.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-09-09
Thanks, guys! I'm glad you liked it. :) (And I'll have to look up Wilhelm Bush!) Lyn's awesome clue phrasing actually inspired the whole idea of focusing on those teeth. ;)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-06
This was a lot of fun to read! I do wonder what became of the injury to her arm, though!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-09-02
This poem just leaves me chuckling whenever I read it! It seems ideally suited to Chicory, but I do confess -- I can't help but trying to sing the words of this poem along to Gollum's "Juicy Fish" song from the LOTR film... That makes it twice the fun!!
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-09-01
That was sweet! It reminded me so much on my childhood books. I love poems that tell a story and this one was done just right. Love the flow and the rhythm in this one and the gag at the ending :) It really feels like a Wilhelm Bush Poem to me, even if that doesn't tell you much, it's a huge compliment ;)
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