Comments on 'Here All Along'

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Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2015-01-19
I love seeing Snowfall's relationships when she was younger, especially interactions between her and Kestrel. This was a great example of the two's bond, and caring for one another. I loved the detail in Snowdrop's thoughts, it really gave you a good look at her perspective.
Sofia Lindstrm
New! Entered: 2014-04-22
This friendship/budding romance with the slight (for elves) age-gap was very sweetmy portayed here. Through this story I can see how the two of them fit so well together.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-12-18
Awwwwwww, very very sweet! What a lovely story. :) I love how it wasn't flaash-resolved with them suddenly announcing a lovemating at the end, but more of a quiet, gradual thing that feels very natural. ^_^ They are SO cute together! It's hard to imagine a time before their lovemating, but you show it with beauty. :)
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-10
I'm glad we got to see the moment these two got together! It feels very fitting for both of their characters -- quiet rather than flashy, introspective and a little reserved, but still very deeply-felt.
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-08
Awwww I like how you show that sometimes relationships kind of just happen :)
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-08-10
I just adore how subtle this is. Everything about it. The tenderness here is quite striking and I just adore this. I'd say this a a nice read of how friendship slowly turns into love but it feels more like friends realizing they were in love for much longer.

I love how you emphasize the feel of trust here. It's such a important thing in a relationship. I also quite like the hinted at relationship between Moss and Snowfall here even if it was just a close furmating. I like seeing different stations of Snowfalls and any elders live and love.
Mareike Heilemann
New! Entered: 2012-08-01
Thank you for writing this, Megan! It is so good to see more about the early romance between those two, and this was such a lovely moment. Wonderful!
Whitney Ware
New! Entered: 2012-07-18
it's interesting to see this backstory further developed, and this makes for such a lovely, lovely moment between these two characters!
Peggy B.
New! Entered: 2012-07-15
Yaaay, for romance! So good to see how these two got together... now, I am curious how and if Snowdrop will make the next step forward.
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