Comments on 'Dawn Guardians'

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Lea R.
New! Entered: 2015-04-02
This poem is short, but sweet. I have a good image now of an early morning in the holt, all is quiet and the preservers take watch. I never expected such a role for them, but it makes perfect sense!
Linda Aarts
New! Entered: 2015-03-07
Aw, what an amazing picture you made us a part of. I loved the feel that everyone's sound asleep and that the preservers watch over them. Very nice :)
Emberra Owen
New! Entered: 2014-08-13
This really does paint a wonderful picture. I love that you chose the end of the holt's day, Its so warm and inviting. You've done a great job.
Sofia Lindström
New! Updated: 2014-04-21
Such a beautiful image you painted in such a short paragraph! I could see the scene in front of me.
Holly H.
New! Entered: 2012-12-13
Nice "image painted with words" piece, here -- it feels like the opening of a children's book! And I like how it gives a little spotlight to the Preservers, whose contributions to the Holt (aside from the uses of their wrapstuff) are sometimes forgotten.
Razzle C.
New! Entered: 2012-10-18
I really love how this poem feels. The words seem easy and flowing and really go well with the imagery of gently spiraling Preservers. It's a nice and comforting image, too, to think the elves and wolves have the Preservers -- true to that name! -- taking such good care of them. :)
Lyn Cavalier
New! Entered: 2012-09-06
I like the image of the Preservers as guardians, ensuring that the tribe is safe, and sleeping.
Melanie D.
New! Entered: 2012-08-06
That's a wonderful picture of a morning in the holt. I did feel such a nice sense of comfort and safety in this. Very nice work on this :)
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